Poem for my quiet friend

[WhispersInTheDark]

I wrote this in 10 minutes while in the wilderness, and decided to make it a topic rather than adding it to one I noticed which is similar in its orientation.

Almost stream of consciousness, changed ordering of three stanzas; changed, it will convey some sense to the right people. I won't read it or come back to it again.



I'm not bad like LL Cool J
Nor good like Jesus Christ
But here is what I will say
About the unjust heist

When you lose the one you love
And you find yourself alone
There is no help from above
You mat see youself undone

Now you are a mother
To your children and your folks
You do not need another
It's the sibling you should coax

If you cannot share your story
Cause of clear and present danger
Then when will their be glory
Instead of bottled anger

Focus now on new beginnings
In the never broken circle
Every day can bring you winnings
New growth is such a miracle

Choosing memories, be careful
Through all the times unjust
See things happy and not fearful
Let the vultures fade to dust

No change can come without work
On self and your place to be
Loudly or by quiet lurk
This for sure you hear from me

Perhaps a thing to find here
Amongst others trying to cope
Not near or dear, but good cheer
Is a little thing called Hope.

[MissA]

nice

[lala]

Cool Whispers . . . :D

[Royal]

the digital age will set you free
so light one up and turn the page
You are the universe and nothing has changed

[captainkiwi]

yeah

[Ponyboy]

I wrote this in 10 minutes while in the wilderness, and decided to make it a topic rather than adding it to one I noticed which is similar in its orientation.

Almost stream of consciousness, changed ordering of three stanzas; changed, it will convey some sense to the right people. I won't read it or come back to it again.



I'm not bad like LL Cool J
Nor good like Jesus Christ
But here is what I will say
About the unjust heist

When you lose the one you love
And you find yourself alone
There is no help from above
You mat see youself undone

Now you are a mother
To your children and your folks
You do not need another
It's the sibling you should coax

If you cannot share your story
Cause of clear and present danger
Then when will their be glory
Instead of bottled anger

Focus now on new beginnings
In the never broken circle
Every day can bring you winnings
New growth is such a miracle

Choosing memories, be careful
Through all the times unjust
See things happy and not fearful
Let the vultures fade to dust

No change can come without work
On self and your place to be
Loudly or by quiet lurk
This for sure you hear from me

Perhaps a thing to find here
Amongst others trying to cope
Not near or dear, but good cheer
Is a little thing called Hope.

Thankin u for givin me more hope in human kind
This is the type of rhymes that I thought I would never find
I feel the light inside you and it feels so divine
You truly understand the struggle of the human kind

The struggle to remodel the old outdated times
The bubble of division and corruption of our minds
Its time to draw new parrarels and let go of some lines
That separate our minds into subconsiousness divided

I'd keep wirtin but phone baterry is low.
But I will tomorrow post more of my flow

[KIWI]

But I will tomorrow post more of my flow

royal has a thread somewhere PB which are just short made up pieces , bizarely descriptive mini-mini-rants ,.... it was a bit a fun as I recall.... if he passes this way he may see this and throw up a link ... you would like it me-thinks

[WhispersInTheDark]

Nice feedback, thank you. :p

Shore Girl probably never even read this.

I can't be her only audience, even if she refuses to be a part of mine.

[Hazelnut]

Very nice.

[Trauma Teased]

I won't read it or come back to it again.



OK, then, neither will I.

:D

[BE2]

me either. just so you know.

[Trauma Teased]

I dont like long poems anyway, I get bored easily.

I just wrote one for my loud mouthed friend, by the way. It's called "Hey, you".



Hey, you

Shut
up

[BE2]

Short and to the point. Excellent effort!