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mojo
02-21-2010, 11:01 AM
The next short story contest is pretty simple, use the excerpt below as the inspiration for your tale. (The main character of your story should feel that he is being persecuted, either real or imagined by one or more people).
That is the only specific requirement, characters, location, everything else is up to you.

Word limit is anywhere between 500 - 5000 words.

Excerpt from Caleb Williams by William Godwin. (http://www.gutenberg.org/catalog/world/readfile?fk_files=50223&pageno=12)

My life has for several years been a theatre of calamity. I have been a mark for the vigilance of tyranny, and I could not escape. My fairest prospects have been blasted. My enemy has shown himself inaccessible to entreaties, and untired in persecution.


Contest will run until March 28th, that should be plenty of time, winner will be decided via a poll thread for the members to vote on. No more than 2 stories per member.

All finished submissions should be posted in this forum (a new thread) with the Title of the story and (CALEB) in brackets so your story can be stickied.

Any other questions regarding the contest to be posted in this thread.

Have fun.

Lexion
02-21-2010, 01:02 PM
Can I just use Phil's thread
from OM ?

Pam
02-21-2010, 02:07 PM
Can I just use Phil's thread
from OM ?

LOL, you couldn't even expand on that, I think he has said it all.

I hope you write one this time, I enjoyed reading everyones story the last time.

mojo
02-21-2010, 08:58 PM
Can I just use Phil's thread
from OM ?

is he being persecuted?

if so yes, as long as its in your own words. :)

Lexion
02-21-2010, 09:11 PM
is he being persecuted?

if so yes, as long as its in your own words. :)

Watch the OM thread.

Yes, he's being persecuted.

:D

mojo
02-21-2010, 09:12 PM
Watch the OM thread.



lol, i think i have better things to do atm.

Lexion
02-21-2010, 09:14 PM
Good Monkey.

Raptor Jesus
02-22-2010, 07:32 AM
Anyone have a link to the thread?

mojo
02-22-2010, 07:49 AM
Anyone have a link to the thread?

that would be the "you are hereby terminated by the borg" thread.

Raptor Jesus
02-22-2010, 08:15 AM
Thanks BUDDY!

GREEN REP FOR BEING SO HELPFUL.

THANKS FOR MAKING AMKON A BETTER, FRIENDLIER PLACE.

Edit to explain: Mojo hates green rep like Superman hates Kryptonite.

mojo
02-22-2010, 10:27 AM
damn you......DAMN YOU TO HELL!!!!!!!

GeneralStriker
02-22-2010, 10:29 AM
.DAMN YOU TO HELL!!!!!!! not to worry, tovarish monkey. he's headed there in a bullet train.

mojo
02-24-2010, 10:51 PM
Bump.

2 submissions so far.

im about 1/2 way through mine, hope to have it up by tomorrow. :)

skunk
02-24-2010, 10:55 PM
What do we win ojom?

Cogburn
02-24-2010, 11:03 PM
57 virgins.

skunk
02-24-2010, 11:16 PM
Do I have to die in order to claim them?

Jackinthebox
02-25-2010, 04:26 AM
:pr: Think I'll do an "I hate cops" short story.

mojo
02-25-2010, 06:59 AM
:pr: Think I'll do an "I hate cops" short story.

go for it, at least we'll know its a story. :stick:

skunk
02-25-2010, 10:21 AM
:pr: Think I'll do an "I hate cops" short story.

Remind me not to read it :p

anarch
02-26-2010, 10:19 AM
Hey you. reading this. Write a story.

boycotteverything
02-26-2010, 10:21 AM
no

mojo
02-27-2010, 12:56 AM
Bumped.

Cogburn
02-27-2010, 12:58 AM
I like how the first topic encouraged me to whine about the alloted length, this topic gets an increase, and yet I only summoned less than 300 words.

Ahhhhh.... art. No wonder I'm a scientist; if I did this all day long I'd be swinging from trees and playing in my own shit.

No offense. :)

Jackinthebox
02-27-2010, 02:09 AM
go for it, at least we'll know its a story. :stick:

Lol, touche. :rifle:

mojo
03-14-2010, 08:18 AM
bump.

couple of weeks to go.

egg
03-14-2010, 02:33 PM
Mojo,
Is this

My life has for several years been a theatre of calamity. I have been a mark for the vigilance of tyranny, and I could not escape. My fairest prospects have been blasted. My enemy has shown himself inaccessible to entreaties, and untired in persecution.


the theme or do we have to actually use the quote in our story? Thanks.

mojo
03-14-2010, 04:14 PM
Mojo,
Is this


the theme or do we have to actually use the quote in our story? Thanks.

just a theme, you dont actually have to use the quote except as inspiration. :)

egg
03-14-2010, 04:15 PM
Thanks.

GeneralStriker
03-14-2010, 04:16 PM
yeah- but do we have to use it as an inspiration or can we just ignore it and carry on?

mojo
03-14-2010, 05:38 PM
yeah- but do we have to use it as an inspiration or can we just ignore it and carry on?

didn't think you were going to submit anything anyway so why would it matter?

lala
03-14-2010, 05:45 PM
didn't think you were going to submit anything anyway so why would it matter?


Maybe one of the sock wants to be in . . . .lol :D

anarch
03-15-2010, 03:01 AM
Sniper bump

anarch
03-25-2010, 12:51 AM
BUMP WRITE SOMETHING YOU


ADD TO THE FLAVOR!

mojo
03-25-2010, 04:45 AM
might sneak one more in before the deadline, though i have a big weekend planned.

as for the rest of you fuckers that would rather whinge and moan about someone setting up a word censor for a bit of a laugh how about contributing to the forum instead of being little fucking bitches.

anarch
03-26-2010, 06:35 PM
2 days left.

egg
03-26-2010, 06:55 PM
When's the next one?

mojo
03-26-2010, 07:10 PM
When's the next one?

i'll come up with something after the vote is in for this one, about a week or so.

egg
03-26-2010, 07:12 PM
i'll come up with something after the vote is in for this one, about a week or so.

Cool. Thanks.

By the way, more than half way through "Foundation's Edge".. I think it's the best one, thus far.

mojo
03-26-2010, 07:15 PM
Cool. Thanks.

By the way, more than half way through "Foundation's Edge".. I think it's the best one, thus far.

have you read "Caliban". its a novel by Roger Macbride Allen based on Aismov's concept of the revision of his "robot laws".

i think you'd like it.

egg
03-26-2010, 07:16 PM
Haven't. I'll check it out.

mojo
03-26-2010, 07:21 PM
Haven't. I'll check it out.

http://www.amazon.com/Isaac-Asimovs-Caliban-Roger-MacBride/dp/1857981685

The viability of the planet Inferno depends on the coexistence of two antagonistic human societies: the Spacers, who depend on robots for everything, and the Settlers, who eschew artificial intelligence. When authorities begin to suspect the existence of a rogue robot, created without the Three Laws that ensure subservience to humans, the delicate partnership begins to unravel. Based on a discussion with the late Asimov, Allen's ( Orphancy Creation , Baen Bks., dist by S. & S., 1988) latest work is a detective novel cum literary tribute that might have been written by the master himself. A good choice for large sf collections.

egg
03-26-2010, 07:34 PM
http://www.amazon.com/Isaac-Asimovs-Caliban-Roger-MacBride/dp/1857981685

The viability of the planet Inferno depends on the coexistence of two antagonistic human societies: the Spacers, who depend on robots for everything, and the Settlers, who eschew artificial intelligence. When authorities begin to suspect the existence of a rogue robot, created without the Three Laws that ensure subservience to humans, the delicate partnership begins to unravel. Based on a discussion with the late Asimov, Allen's ( Orphancy Creation , Baen Bks., dist by S. & S., 1988) latest work is a detective novel cum literary tribute that might have been written by the master himself. A good choice for large sf collections.




Thanks, man. I've been reading more sci-fi lately than I ever had. What I do love about Asimov is that he wrote most of this stuff in the 50s so you get people living in a civilization 20,000-30,000 years in the future traveling in hyperspace and using tapes.... HA!!!! Awesome.

mojo
03-26-2010, 07:38 PM
asimov was truly brilliant.

wrote a shitload of pure science stuff as well, most of it way over my head.

egg
03-26-2010, 07:43 PM
The guy definitely was brilliant. I like the way that he incorporated the two series into one.
If you read fantasy at all, read The Wheel of Time series by Robert Jordan. Fucking good stuff.

mojo
03-26-2010, 07:45 PM
i like jordan too.

most of my collection is sf but i also have a lot of horror and fantasy. some of my most cherished stuff though is 40's, 50's and 60's sf.

egg
03-26-2010, 07:48 PM
I'm more of a Hesse, Vonnegut, Martin Amis type of guy but I started with Fantasy as a child. Got into sci-fi (loved the first 3 books of Dune. Read them all but didn't enjoy the final 3 as much) but never became a die hard fan. I have read Herbert, Asimov, and Heinlein, though. Good stuff.