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JiveTurkey
03-22-2008, 04:31 AM
It's crap but at last mojo can't say I didn't participate hahaha.

Will throw together a better one before the deadline.

Where the hell are the other submissions? Dammit ppl, PARTICIPATE!!!

haha

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November 8

It’s hot, damn hot. Is it supposed to be this fucking hot in November?

I’m not really sure where I am. It is supposed to be Georgia. If this is Georgia, the south really is hell. I’m sure I have been here for more than 24 hours, yet, the sun has not risen. I should have stayed on that goddamn train. At least there is food here (a vending machine full of junk), I need sleep.

November 9

I assume it is the 9th. I have been awake for probably 30 minutes. I found a small cot behind the ticket counter and it was surprisingly comfortable. I suppose I will tell you a bit about this place.

I stepped off the train to take a piss and stretch my legs a bit. At first, it looked like a typical little train station. It was well lit and clean with a single hallway down the middle which lead to the restrooms and ticketing counter. 2 others stepped off the train and bee lined to the restroom ahead of me. It was when I came out that I realized the train was gone and after my brief fit of cursing the soul of the engineer that I noticed something else.

There was no light from anywhere but the station. When I say there was no light, I don’t mean that it was just dark, dark I can handle. No, there was nothing. It was as if the train station had been pitched into a void. There was no moon, no stars, just, nothingness. I walked to the edge of the loading platform and found that even the tracks had disappeared. The station might as well be floating through space.

I am not ashamed to admit that I was (am) terrified.

Now, as I said earlier, up here in the station it is as hot as any place I have ever been. I swear, it must be a hundred and five. But, when my hand passes beyond the station, it is absolutely freezing. And I don’t just mean cold, when my hand breaks that plane, it feels as if it is being scorched by the cold. I have only dared try this once, but I have no doubt that the cold would kill me were I to attempt to leave the station. For all intents and purposes, I am trapped. I am, alone.

November 10

I believe it is my birthday. I thought all of the previous ones were bad. I had no idea.

There is still no sun. That pitch black void is still surrounding my new island home. I’m guessing it was an hour ago now that I was awakened by a terrible cry from the darkness. 100 degrees or not, it scared me senseless and made my blood run cold. It sounded like a cat caught in the fan blade of a car. It was awful and I am now even more scared than before. Something is out there. Not a cat.

I pray that I am dreaming. Please let me wake up.

November 10 (?) Continued

I blacked out. I’m not sure why.

I assume that it is still the 10th. For all I know, it could be March.

I have a killer headache. Must be all the junk that I have to eat. I’m starving, I’d kill for a steak right now. Hell, even a goddamn fast food burger would feel like a luxury.

?November?

I can’t concentrate. No more screams. Humming, constant. Inside my head. Please stop. Can’t hear my own voice. Just humming.

Nose bleed.

????

Blacked out again. The humming has stopped.

I can’t take this any longer. I am terrified. I pray this is just a nightmare.

Too long

Why am I still alive? No food. No water. Has to have been weeks.

Please, just let me die.

Talking to myself. Where is everyone?

Months
Tried to leave.

Can’t.

Scared.

More screams, just now. Have to try again. Can’t be worse than this.

Goodbye

Leaving.

Hope no one finds this.

JiveTurkey
03-22-2008, 04:38 AM
Just as a note:


Yea I deviated a bit from the "theme". I had to haha.

All I could picture was the old "Ray Bradbury Theatre" episode with Jeff Goldblum deciding to explore the "strange little town".



Hope that's acceptable mojo.

mojo
03-22-2008, 05:02 AM
Hope that's acceptable mojo.

Shit yeah, they are just rough guides, i would hope you'd all just
let your imaginations take you were they will with those idea's
merely as a starting point.

Bloody nice little story mate, mine will be up in the next couple of days.
Its nice to not have to censor my story's as well. Fuck it everyone
swears, particularly in hostile or strange enviroments, i hate
having to censor myself when i write.

Firestar
03-22-2008, 08:10 AM
Loved it Jasn! :)
I always wanted to see what your imagination could conjure up..or maybe that could be a bad thing..LOL.

Lexion
03-22-2008, 10:56 AM
Very cool.

Can't help but think our
characters were riding
teh same train. :)

Regards,
Lex